A couple of years ago, I was at a seminar on getting organized (I am a sucker for that kind of thing), and the presenter asked for examples of our current projects-in-process. Naturally, the example I came up with was the book I was working on at the time. Equally naturally, the presenter latched onto it as an interesting and unusual example, and proceeded to lay out the steps that would get me to “finish the project.” It went something like this:

  • Finish the scene
  • Finish the chapter
  • Repeat 1 and 2 until rough draft is complete
  • Revise and edit
  • Mail to agent
  • Sell to editor
  • Publish book

I started to object, and the presenter explained that the project wasn’t finished until it was finished, all the way through to publication, and part of his point was that we needed to figure out where the “real” endpoints were. And everybody else in the seminar nodded sagely.

I sat there trying to figure out how to explain what was wrong with his list, and just how many additional steps were missing in between “Sell to editor” and “Publish book,” and why “publish book” wasn’t actually the ending point he thought it was, but after a minute I realized that as far as the seminar was concerned, it didn’t matter. That list is pretty much how most non-writers and pre-published writers see the process. Since all the other seminar participants were not writers, all of them got the presenter’s point. Heck, even I got the point, in spite of the fact that the way he was applying the principle was, in this specific case, oversimplified to the point of unworkability.

The problem, from my perspective, was that he’d taken several related projects, at different levels of detail, and jumbled them all together as if they were one project. (That, and he didn’t have a clue about the actual publishing process or where I was in it; for instance, “sell to editor” was irrelevant, as I’d sold the book as part of a contract signed several years before.)

When I think about the process of writing and publishing a book, it looks more like this:

  1. Finish rough draft
  2. Revise and edit rough draft
  3. Email (or mail) final manuscript to editor and agent
  4. Do editorial revisions
  5. Do my part of pre-publication production work (e.g., copyedit, page proofs)
  6. Do whatever publicity stuff I’ve committed to

Each of those numbered items above, I think of as a separate project that depends on finishing the previous project, the way decorating the living room depends on having first built the house. I think of them this way because each of them requires me to be in a different mental space. Writing the manuscript (#1) is totally different from revising and editing it (#2). Getting the final ms. formatted and mailed off to my editor (#3) is a purely administrative task I can do when I’m nearly brain-dead. Editorial revisions are a moveable feast; sometimes they’re big and take months, other times there are only a few and I can knock them off in a couple of days. Copyedit and page proofs (#5) are a different sort of administrative task, and publicity (#6) is like nothing else anywhere on the list. Lumping all of them together as one giant meta-project is discouraging.

It’s already going to take me a year or more to get the book written; adding a couple of months for revising and polishing and mailing off to the editor might be OK, but tacking on six more months of waiting for and doing editorial revisions and another year or so spent mostly waiting for the copyedit and page proofs, and then another year of pre-and-post-publication publicity, and it becomes soul-killing.

I may not be “done with the book” when I write “The End” at the bottom of the last page for the first time, but I absolutely am “done with the first draft,” and I want to check it off, secure in the knowledge that I am done with something, even if there’s still a lot left to do.

On the other hand, I have to admit that from another angle, the guy was right: there is a meta-project involving getting from a blank page all the way to a book that’s available and selling, and being aware of that ultimate end result can keep people from neglecting the later projects. Of course, if one’s ambition is to be the next Emily Dickenson, one can stop at project #2 and stick the final revised ms. in a drawer somewhere for one’s heirs to find and deal with later. It depends on what one’s meta-project is.

3 Comments
  1. I think it also changes drastically when the book is self-pubbed vs. traditionally pubbed. Indie books do sometimes go through an editor (hopefully – the good ones do!) but the process of revisions probably doesn’t take as long. You’re right that each step requires a different mind set though, and being someone who loves checklists, it’d be discouraging to lump everything together!

    • Unless you are the risen shade of Roberston Davies, any book needs at least a copy-edit.

      (I know many books don’t get that, but it’s not OK.)

      I’d be chary of looking at revisions as a length of time; it depends a great deal on writing process how many and what kind of revisions someone does. There are people who write one draft and there are people who cyclically revise and expand an initial outline in six passes and all sorts of other things.

      One way to think of the writing process uses the general insight that it’s not a process until there’s feedback. (“Ordered series of steps” isn’t the same as “process”; if it was, everyone would get the same results from a recipe. The recipe is usually just assuming that the necessary feedback is there; that is, you already know what “stiff peaks form” looks like.) So there’s the step where the feedback is you, the writer, and the steps where the feedback is a crit group or an acquiring editor or a copy editor, and the steps where feedback is readers, so the book isn’t even really done when it has started selling. (If it’s a series book and there’s an overwhelming response of “but what about that cat in chapter six?”, one might well put some more about the cat into this current book in that series, as you hadn’t expected to do when the feedback was just coming from you.)

  2. I am at about step 4.5 on that presenter’s list (with the first book), and have been for longer than I rightly care to total up. The lag times in the process are bad enough as it is; if I had to wait until his step 7 before I could declare anything “done”, I’d be ready to fling myself off a cliff.

    Which brings up another problem with his version of the process: The writing and revising parts are under the writer’s direct control. The rest of it… well, I can control whether the MS gets sent out, but beyond that, whether anyone buys it is out of my hands. Making “sell it” a part of my process is rather like having a garden project with a step of “have rain on Tuesday.”